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kenny

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Juz A Story 4 U 2 Read...
« on: March 11, 2005, 09:25:10 PM »
Juz A Story 4 U 2 Read...

As I sat there in English class,
I stared at the girl next to me
She was my so called \'best friend \'
I stared at her long, silky hair,
and wished she was mine
But she didn\'t notice me like that,
and I knew it...
After class, she walked up to me and
asked me for the notes

she had missed the day before

I handed them to her

She said \'thanks\' and left...

I want to tell her, I want her to know
that I don\'t want to be just friends,
I love her but I\'m just too shy,
and I don\'t know why...

11th Grade.......................................................

The phone rang...On the other end,
it was her...She was in tears,
mumbling on and on about how her
love had broke her heart
She asked me to come over because
she didn\'t want to be alone, So I did
As I sat next to her on the sofa,
I stared at her soft eyes, wishing she was mine
After 2 hours, one Drew Barrymore movie,
and three bags of chips, she decided to go home
She looked at me, said \'thanks\' and left...
I want to tell her, I want her to know that
I don\'t want to be just friends,
I love her but I\'m just too shy,
and I don\'t know why...

Senior
year.............................................................

One fine day she walked to my locker
\"My date is sick\" she said, \"hes not gonna go
well\",
I didn\'t have a date, and in 7th grade,
we made a promise that if neither of us had dates,
we would go together just as \'best friends\'
So we did...That night, after everything was over,
I was standing at her front door step
I stared at her as She smiled at me
and stared at me with her crystal eyes
Then she said- \"I had the best time, thanks!\" and
left...
I want to tell her, I want her to know
that I don\'t want to be just friends,
I love her but I\'m just too shy,
and I don\'t know why...

Graduation..........................................................

A day passed, then a week, then a month
Before I could blink, it was graduation day
I watched as her perfect body floated like an angel
up on stage to get her diploma
I wanted her to be mine-but
she didn\'t notice me like that, and I knew it
Before everyone went home,
she came to me in her smock and hat,
and cried as I hugged her
Then she lifted her head from my shoulder
and said- \'you\'re my best friend, thanks\' and left...
I want to tell her, I want her to know
that I don\'t want to be just friends,
I love her but I\'m just too shy,
and I don\'t know why...

Marriage..............................................................
...............

Now I sit in the pews of the church
That girl is getting married now
and drive off to her new life,
married to another man
I wanted her to be mine,
but she didn\'t see me like that,
and I knew it...
But before she drove away,
she came to me and said \'you came! \'
She said \'thanks\' and left...
I want her to know that
I don\'t want to be just friends,
I love her but I\'m just too shy,
and I don\'t know why...

Death..................................................................
........

Years passed, I looked down at the coffin
of a girl who used to be my \'best friend\'.
At the service, they read a diary entry
she had wrote in her high school years
This is what it read:
\"I stare at him wishing he was mine;
but he doesn\'t notice me like that,
and I know it. I want to tell him,
I want him to know that
I don\'t want to be just friends,
I love him but I\'m just too shy,
and I don\'t know why...
I wish he would tell me he loved me ! \"
...\'I wish I did too\'...
I thought to my self, and I cried...
\" Do yourself a favour, tell her/him you love them...
They won\'t be there...................Forever :D  :?:
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Honeybunnie

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« Reply #1 on: March 11, 2005, 09:27:09 PM »
.....Nice story Kenny.....I think I\'ve seen a different version of it as well.
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Susia

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« Reply #2 on: March 11, 2005, 09:28:40 PM »
I love you
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fagin

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« Reply #3 on: March 12, 2005, 06:26:36 AM »
I love you.
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uapo4

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« Reply #4 on: April 09, 2005, 12:09:30 AM »
Quote from: \"Susia\"
I love you

Quote from: \"fagin\"
I love you


I thought about commenting on this, but for some reason I forgot. Anyway, now that I finally found it, could you please tell me who the \"YOU\" refers to. Is it me? :lol:  :lol:  :twisted:  :wink:  If so, thanks and get me some garri to go with the statement; I\'m hungry these days...if not, still thanks but don\'t say it anymore to me unless you mean it :wink:
** MY HEAD IS GETTING BIGGER ** :twisted:
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objobj

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« Reply #5 on: April 09, 2005, 12:47:43 AM »
uapo4, that was too funny. am still cracking up. yes, susia na fagin ole onye wu the \"you\" in i love you? inquiry minds want to know.
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fagin

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« Reply #6 on: April 10, 2005, 02:03:45 AM »
@ OBJ, hmmmm i see. Don\'t worry i will reveal who my one and only love is pretty soon.

@Uzoma, u r funny!!!
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uapo4

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« Reply #7 on: April 12, 2005, 10:34:04 PM »
@Fagin, still waiting to know...and I\'m hungry :twisted:
Susia, you better come through :twisted:
Please, don\'t mind me...before I get too much to handle :wink:
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fagin

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« Reply #8 on: April 12, 2005, 10:37:16 PM »
@Uzoma, don\'t worry u\'ll know. :oops:
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« Reply #9 on: April 13, 2005, 10:12:58 PM »
for real. am getting tired of all this love story. I wanted to tell him/her that I wanted more out of our frienship  but i couldn\'t...............what the hell!!!!!!!!!!!!!

if he/she says no, dust urself up and move on, life is not over.

biko abeg, if u like somebody like that tell him/her and stop waiting till that person dies to finally say..............\"i wish i told her/him i loved her\"................if it\'s me. i\'ll wake up from the dead and punch u.......lol

(if i  sound a little angry, it\'s just that am just having a bad wed. at school :evil: )
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uapo4

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« Reply #10 on: April 14, 2005, 01:51:45 AM »
LOL @Onyii. \"Yes, tell that person\"...that\'s the message of the story anyway :lol:
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kenmartins

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« Reply #11 on: April 15, 2005, 07:02:44 AM »
Can\'t wait to tell Amber how much i love her.LOL
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uapo4

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« Reply #12 on: April 15, 2005, 09:16:32 AM »
LOL. Make sure you mean what you are about to tell Amber before... 8O Next thing, you\'ll be shouting what a mistake :P  :twisted: I\'m just messing with you... :wink:
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fagin

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« Reply #13 on: April 15, 2005, 11:04:09 AM »
Can\'t wait to tell that \"special person\" how much I LOVE and ADORE him
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