Author Topic: CREATIVE STORY...  (Read 41018 times)

fagin

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« on: March 06, 2005, 10:24:32 AM »
It\'s a game!!! I\'ll start a story... a short story and the next person continues from where i stopped. This story has no plot... u make it go wherever u want it to go.


RULES!!!


1. PLEASE PLEASE AND PLEASE read the posts before urs and be familiar with the story b4 u post ya continuation.
2. Please if someone chooses a name for a character, please keep using the name do not change it.
3. Be creative...it\'s like a creative writing.
4. No vulgar words. Any vulgar words will be deleted by the admin.

OK i will start:

It was a friday night back in September 04, they held each other\'s hand as they walked on the deserted beach watching the waves hit the rocks. A deep fear of losing her is in his heart as he held her tightly.The doctor\'s words rang in his ears..........................


"The first and final kiss is the one that creates the ultimate symphony of love"

chizor

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« Reply #1 on: March 06, 2005, 07:05:47 PM »
...\"it\'s a very rare disease. A cure is yet to be found. Chances of Jenna surviving are very remote.\"  

He gazed deeply into her eyes. Thoughts of all the struggles they\'d  been through, the wonderful times they had shared.................
Whenever I see an old lady slip and fall on a wet sidewalk, my first instinct is to laugh. But then I think, what if I was an ant, and she fell on me. Then it wouldn\'t seem quite so funny.
--Jack Handey,

Honeybunnie

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« Reply #2 on: March 06, 2005, 10:42:19 PM »
But then he stopped to think of the last time she had told him that he wasn\'t the man for her, and he figured that she might be using him to get through this trying time in her life, and so he concoted a plan.

He went by to Rosa the coffee lady across the house who always called him pappi very fondly, and he whispered something in her ears. She laughed as he started to walk away. As he stepped on the sidewalk, he heard a loud boom, and.........

fagin

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« Reply #3 on: March 06, 2005, 11:19:20 PM »
...the cops said the first shot may have been fired at 5:20 that evening, when a bullet pierced the window of a Georgia Avenue store. But the killer struck his first target about 5.00pm outside the Shoppers Food Warehouse. He ran to the store because he remebered that earlier on his girlfriend was going to pick some few things from there. Fortunately, she was ok...nothing happened. They both went home that evening but something kept bothering the both of them. She wanted to tell him that she\'s gat somebody else. He wanted to tell her he had a very rare disease... but they both didn\'t know how to tell each other. They began to reminisce on how they first met each other....

Anthony was 10yrs old and Jenna was 8yrs old.....They both attended FUTO primary school. After graduation, Anthony went to GSSO and Jenna went to FGGC OW. From there...
"The first and final kiss is the one that creates the ultimate symphony of love"

Susia

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« Reply #4 on: March 06, 2005, 11:42:08 PM »
....they both got in contact with each other despite the different secondary school they had to go. Anthony would meet up with Jenna after school and they would hang out and talk about their events in school. Jenna after her third year in FGGCOW decided that she wanted to move into the dormitory for her senior years. While Jenna was in school, she would leave school on weekends with her friends and one of of those occasions when she left school.......
Begin with the determination to suceed and the work is half done already.

okey

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« Reply #5 on: March 07, 2005, 12:23:37 AM »
and on a windy harmattan afternoon, they were excited about meeting up for lunch. As they walked down the street, Anthony was one always filled with suprises.

He convienced her she had a lint on hair. Which she discovers it was a lovely soft-pink hibiscus flower. Cherising the moment, she hugs him while shading a tear; and suddenly screams Chi mu ooooooo!

A speeding young buck cruising with a car load of friends looses control and  strikes Anthony who couldn\'t get out in time.... :o
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Quality is never an accident; It is always the result of high intention, sincere effort, Intelligent direction and skillful execution;
It represents the wise choice of many alternatives

chizor

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« Reply #6 on: March 07, 2005, 12:48:45 AM »
....\"Jenna! Jenna!.... It\'s 8.30am you\'re going to be late for your appointment\" her mum screams. Slowly openning her eyes, confused, her heart beating and wondering what had happened, Jenna realises she had been dreaming...
Whenever I see an old lady slip and fall on a wet sidewalk, my first instinct is to laugh. But then I think, what if I was an ant, and she fell on me. Then it wouldn\'t seem quite so funny.
--Jack Handey,

Honeybunnie

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« Reply #7 on: March 07, 2005, 01:06:47 AM »
but as she alowly opened her eyes, she realized that there was so much more to her dream as she could hear noises and people screaming that bakassi men were outside looking for Anthony. Once she realized this, she grabbed Anthony from beside her and they began their very slow trek to find the man who would save him and clear his name of all that he had been accused of, including the woman from the next village who had ...........

chizor

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« Reply #8 on: March 08, 2005, 12:29:07 AM »
....accused Anthony of being the father of her unborn child.
Whenever I see an old lady slip and fall on a wet sidewalk, my first instinct is to laugh. But then I think, what if I was an ant, and she fell on me. Then it wouldn\'t seem quite so funny.
--Jack Handey,

Honeybunnie

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« Reply #9 on: March 08, 2005, 12:46:12 AM »
\"How dare he\", the King thundered , who says that the child should not be sacrificed to the gods of our land, \"there are way too many people dying in the land, there is no water and there is food, if this sacrifice will save us, then it is the little that we can do for our country\"...

After this meeting the town crier is sent to bring the news that the healing of the land will only start after the sacrifice of the child, upon hearing this, Adamma broke down in tears, she had suffered in childbirth, and the baby girl was only 3 months old, why kill an innocent child whose father was lost in the great battle at Amaohia....As she lamented this fate that has befallen her, she heard the squeal of a hawk, a sign from the gods ......

juice

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« Reply #10 on: March 08, 2005, 01:36:45 AM »
There was a loud noise boom, and  anthony jumps up, and realise that it was  a dream, and at the dream he had the greatest shock of his young life. What anthony and jenna dont know  is that both of them have so much in comon, and they keep sharing painfull thoughts about each other in the dream, they are both healthy people and never been sick in their life. all the creazyness was just the fear of loosing each other, and that cause them to have bad dreams.

so anthony picks of the phone and call his childhood friend juice back in texas, telling him about the dreams.  juice: ey men that is your soul mate dawg. you remember telling me about the flower, then walking on the beach, that is all love  and, then having her in your dreams comon she got twisted up in the game, and all the near deaths show you got love bigger than life for her (strong bond) and you can go through a lot bakashi, sacrificial junk back in the village. Go get your girl. anthony jumped off the phone happier than a rooster in a hen house.........
i remain yours for his glory

Honeybunnie

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« Reply #11 on: March 08, 2005, 01:47:23 AM »
only to meet the soldiers at the door, \"EVERY BODY UP\" they screamed, its time for your daily rounds.  as the closest soldier got close enough to him, he got the sign from Mr. Bravo, he slapped the soldiers hands, with a quick turn, snatched the gun from the guards hands, Give me Susia, he yelled \"WHERE IS SHE......\", as the guard slowly got up from his initial slump caused by the blow, he was struck again in the face.....

Mr. Bravo was so tense, they all started to move in the same direction, towards the mountain top, from where they could hear Susia screaming....\"HELP...HELP me\", Mr Bravo, turned to Tony and said, \"AT this point we stop fighting for our motherland, that has betrayed us very personally, and we start fighting for love, and become the heroes that we should be\"......

And then they took off running, the cold wind of the Suleja zuma mountains blowing in their face, as they both reminisced their long journey to this point, after being told they were part of a secret test plan being run buy the NIA (Nigerian Intelligence Agency). They had been approached.......

juice

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« Reply #12 on: March 08, 2005, 02:12:28 AM »
juice: It was a glorious day the sun was out as usual, am in my texas hut and the phone rings it was my boy tony. He told me that he is getting ready for igba nkwu, and when the day comes he want me to be his best man. ma etieeeeee hey..........
i remain yours for his glory

Honeybunnie

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« Reply #13 on: March 08, 2005, 06:37:21 AM »
Osuofia onwu anyi be this, where have you been, I thought you were in London. Osuofia did not have time to reply as he was weary from travelling across the world where ......

juice

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« Reply #14 on: March 08, 2005, 04:43:26 PM »
oh boy what can i say my uncle osuofia just got home for my traditional wedding, ain\'t no telling where he is coming from, i think london.  He has not been himself, he usually out of control, like contol psot by ama JK owerri always busy running his mouth, i think he lost a lot of money playing pool. Anyhow he\'s gonna rebound.

mean while let me go Timasy and call my boy juice, and see when he is coming home,and what he plans for my okokporo night party. He told me that he gonna have the party jump up so high you would think i was sent to the orbit. He was right, am happier than a rooster in a hen house cause am gonna be the life of the party
i remain yours for his glory